Your list looks pretty good. Things that stand out to me are:
Your water system. Ditch the Nalgene for a Deer Park one liter bottle (-5.3 oz) and the bladder for a lighter one (-6 oz).
10 ounces for a pillow seems pretty heavy. The Nemo Fillow Elite is pretty comfy and weighs 3 oz (-7 oz)...
The internet at my house has been down for about a week. I've hiked or lifted every day. It looks like everyone has been staying after it.
2 miles today.
Ultralight Ridge Knife (fixed blade)
Small knife sharpener
Havalon scalpel handle with ~ 4 blades
small hemostats for changing scalpel blades
30"x50" piece of Tyvek
2 Xtra large Viam game bags
3 smaller 16"x24" Jimmy Tarps game bags
2 pairs of nitrile gloves
2' of electrical tape (wrapped around...